Friday, October 21, 2011

Secret Sauce

The first two bites were great, but by the third I already felt full. Now something is moving in my stomach, and I'm pretty sure it isn't food.



Linking up with Write on Edge. I was supposed to express or elicit fear in 160 characters or less. 



15 comments:

  1. Ewww! An interesting take on the prompt.

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  2. Ick. But I guess that's the point :)

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  3. Love that this one is totally unique!

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  4. Heehee! I love it. But then? I'm a weirdo.

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  5. Creepy! Very ick.

    - Barbara @ www.derebus.net/home, via Write on Edge

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  6. Blech! But, that also means success! :>

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  7. Ewewewewewewew! Very creepy. In a good way!

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  8. That is creepy. All I saw in my head were the aliens in Steven King's Dreamcatcher. Great job.

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  9. ewwww...I would not want to be at that table

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  10. Oh boy, food poisoning or aliens? Nice. :-)

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  11. Great imagery - definitely very Sigourney Weaver/Alien and creepy. But it doesn't read as a text to me.

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  12. Oh, this just taps into that fear of angering the waiter. You never know what he'll do to your food before it reaches you. Nice job!

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  13. Eeeeewwww!

    (Great job!)

    But eeeewwwww!

    :)

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  14. Oh! Yucky sci-fi scary! Yay!

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